10.6. Run of the 2nd half

Scene 7

Scene 8

Scene 9

Scene 10

Scene 11

Scene 13

Scene 14

And here is the feedback we got from Siou:

My feedback and how I am going to fix it:

• Bodyguard. I am a bodyguard in scenes 7, 10 and 11, and especially in scenes 10 and 11, there are many of us bodyguards in the scene. Siou suggested whether I should change my bodyguard character a little bit, to separate me from the more dominant ones. She suggested to make him more jittery, which is a good idea, except I feel like I already have two characters that have a similar restlessness about them, Ui and Flake. Ui, especially in the beginning is more nervous and restless because of it, where as Flake has very fast paced direct movements. I pointed this out to Siou, but I do still think she is right about separating the types of bodyguards to bring on some variety. Perhaps I could develop my character as Flake to become less jittery and even more direct or make him more relaxed so that then I can bring this new characteristic to my bodyguard character
• In scene 14 I went to sit back down too early. I realized this in the scene, but didn't feel that it would work for me to get back up again, so I didn't do so to fix it. This was really silly of me, since I should have looked up a part of the long speech when I go back to seat, but also the different ways I react to them. I have since then looked at the speech and decided that at the line " Deceive the Clarks and slay Dullfeet-" I will start walking away from the chair and on the line " The body of Ernesto Roma may be hid in earth" I will start walking back, reaching the chair at the line "Mark my words, Arturo"
•  I and everyone need to look at scene 7 and know the points when we need to clap exactly

Over all, I felt this run went okay. I personally need to look at my lines again, because the song is still a bit unfamiliar for me and I messed up in scene 13 a couple of times. I want us to do the tech first thing on Monday when we get to Pelham, because there is so much of them that make the show for us and enhance moments, but also most of the transitions are hard to run without them, so we need to get the tech done so after that we can just run the show over and over again to make it tight and smooth.